Warrior Within : Chapter I

16. september 2010 at 21:37 | Halfdann |  The Warrior Within Saga

The Warrior Within Saga : Chapter I

Few centuries ago, there was a great warrior, Ragnok, was his name.
He was filled with anger and wrath, everybody had fear of him, because of his strenght.
No-one was so brave to try to beat him down, because everybody knew, that he fought and won many battles.



But suddenly, some strange woman appeared in a small village of Dion.Near the Ragnok's nest. While she put her hood down and came to the village square, everybody was just staring at her.
In a one second everybody was filled with lots of unanswered questions."Who is this?", "Is she good?", "What does she want?" etc.
When a major Halfdann - head leader of the village, recieved a message about the strange woman.He immediately stopped doing his work and ran out to the village square.
When he arrived and came to her, she started her speach.
"My name is Akara the divine sorceress of Middle Earth.","I heard some stories about one great evil warrior Ragnok. And i came here to defeat him."

After this speach, whole village started laughing really loudly. then the crowd calmed down and major told her. "OK. If you want to give a shot, and try to beat him, you can try it, but you'll fail. His nest is near this village, on a mountain of Newerth. We wish you luck, bye and break a leg."

Akara bought some supplies for a battle, then she begun the journey. When she approached at the enter of the cave, her eyes turned into a black color and after a few weird moves of her hands, her body was surrounded by a cold aura..
Just a few minutes after her approach,begun small earthquake, which suddenly calmed down. From a shadow of the cave, a silhouette of the great warrior appeared.
He wasn't in a battle stance. When he saw Akara, he stood still.
he was completely amazed, because of her charm and because her appearance was just gorgeous.
But Akara's mind stayed clear.She spelled a lightning bolt quickly.
Ragnok dodged her spell and immediately tried to slam her and end her life with an guillotine skill with his two handed great sword.
As soon as it was possible, Akara spelled frozen touch very quickly.
Her attack was succesfull. Ragnok turned into an ice block,became completely frozen and jailed in ice.
Then she suddenly dissappear.
And the last news about her was a letter which was delivered to major Halfdann, by a small poor boy.In this letter was a warning written in an old scrypt.
"Ragnok is now dead and jailed in ice.Only with a human touch and womans breath, can be unjailed."


Three years later.
The day seemed to be like other days,then begun strong earthquake......

To be continued


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1 AngEl AngEl | Web | 19. september 2010 at 22:26 | React

"break a leg" means the same as "zlom vaz"?? that´s incredible!
the story is realy good. I´m looking forward to a new one :-)

2 Halfdann Halfdann | Web | 20. september 2010 at 18:14 | React

Yep. You get it right - "zlom vaz".
Thank you wery much..im glad.

3 lady-dariel lady-dariel | Web | 23. september 2010 at 18:12 | React

hmm..konečně někdo kdo mi typuje mín  než 18 fsakz díky..a btw. nemužeš ty články psát třeba v němčině?:D to bych možná přečetla :)):D

4 Halfdann Halfdann | Web | 23. september 2010 at 19:26 | React

No I can't! I hate german language.

5 lady-dariel lady-dariel | Web | 23. september 2010 at 19:33 | React

a co třeba čeština..ta ti snad něco říka ne?:D

6 Halfdann Halfdann | Web | 23. september 2010 at 22:56 | React

Jj. Kdyby sis precetla zacatek uvodni 2 clanky ak sem psal proc pisu anglicky.(anglicky)
Aspon se odlisim od vsech blogu uz jen tim ze pisu celej anglicky..krom komentaru tu nejni jediny slovo cesky.
:) a navic me to bavi..

7 lady-dariel lady-dariel | Web | 24. september 2010 at 18:30 | React

toho jsem si všimla.. :) tk jako jo..si to strčim do googlu :D ja nic proti tomu nemám :)

8 Halfdann Halfdann | Web | 24. september 2010 at 19:36 | React

to je prave nejhorší když tohle nekdo delá. Vety nedavaj smysl...a spousta slovicek ma v tom kontextu uplne jinej vyznam...
Kdo v dnesni dobe taky neumi anglicky ze?..

9 lady-dariel lady-dariel | Web | 24. september 2010 at 19:45 | React

třeba ja :) zato nemužu že sem se učila němčinu a ted začínam s angličtinou a francouštinou?

10 Halfdann Halfdann | Web | 25. september 2010 at 2:13 | React

Inu skoda. Hold je tomu tak, kazdy ma asi cit pro jiny jazyk - ja primo nesnesu nemcinu. Nekdo ji zvlada skvele...ale ja ani nechci se ji ucit. Nemam to rad nu. Ale jinak uznavam ze se hodi ji umet...bohuzel to nezkousnu xD

11 lady-dariel lady-dariel | Web | 25. september 2010 at 18:55 | React

já  se jí  taky učila nedobrovolně ne základce :-? páš na anglnu chtěli všichni :-?

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